JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 17

The benefits of importing Chinese goods do not outweigh the consequences. For example, When items are being IMPORTED from China, they are a lot cheaper. This shows that people could save their money and wont have to pay as much. This also shows that when they EXPORT things to the U.S. they will get more jobs and their economy will get better. In addition, they are very FUNCTIONED with their items that are for sale. This shows that they are smarter. This also shows that they know what they're doing. In conclusion, importing Chinese goods does not outweigh the consequences.

"Lamb to the Slaughter" Irony Paragraph.

In "Lamb to the Slaughter," Roald Dahl uses irony to make the story realistic. For example, when she tells tells herself “Alright, so I’ve killed him.” right after she hit him with the lamb leg. This shows that she has to find herself an alibi before anything else. This also shows that it is memorable because the characters don’t know that she killed him but the audience knows that she did. In addition, Mary Maloney tells the grocer “Patrick’s decided that he’s tired and doesn’t want to eat out tonight.” when she is at the grocery store buying food (p. 320). This shows that she is lying to the grocer to make herself look innocent. This also shows that it is memorable because she made a very good alibi to cover herself. In conclusion, the “Lamb to the Slaughter” by Roald Dahl is realistic because he uses irony.
 

Shopping night at Target

After dinner, everyone that was on campus started to aboard the buses. It was around 6:00 when we left the campus and out to our adventure. We arrive to Target around 6:15-6:30, and then we had to wait in this huge line to get our stickers, stickers to show that we are part of the system. About a half an hour had gone by, I got my sticker and ran for a cart (even though I really didn't need one) and ran with Brittany do go and look for things to buy. Then I left Brittany to go and follow Sabrina, then I left her to head to the electronics section. Then I waited to get a phone, but they ran out of all the good ones. I soon left my cart somewhere and looked for something else to buy. After ten minutes I had found it, I found the electronic that I was going to buy. It was the Nintendo 3DS and they only had purple and pink. I hate the color pink, so I choose the purple one. Then I chased one of the workers to get it for me, then I was looking for a game. He came back and told me that I had to hurry and choose a game. So I choose one of the worse ones imaginable. I choose the "Cooking Mama game". I was so ashamed of myself, but then I got over it and went in line to go and pay for my things. Then somebody had a big jar of circus animal cookies, and I was like "Whoa, where did you get those?!?!" then they said "Oh, it's in the cookies section." and I said "Can you hold my spot so I could go and get some???" ad he said "Yeah, just hurry up and go get some." Then I was away, trying to walk fast to the cookies aisle, doing my best not to bump into someone. Then I made it to the cookie section. So I was looking for it and looking, then I couldn't find it. So I go and get a big bottle of coca cola. Then I see Andrew with the same kind of cookies as the other guy did, I go up to Andrew and ask him where he had gotten those animal cookies. He said it was in the cookie section, then he showed me where it was located. So I took the animal cookies and ran. Then I stopped running to walk fast, because I didn't want the soda to explode in my face. Finally I reach my buddy and wait in my line. Then one of the older people had told me that I could not buy my soda but I could keep my animal cookies. Then I was getting closer to the cashier lady, but another older person who is very mean was telling me that I could not buy my cookies. So I was getting very mad and so I told her that the other lady told me that I could buy them. So she let me through and I bought all of my stuff. Then Sabrina and I went in a van instead of a bus and got home early. That is my adventure at the late night shopping trip to Target.

What would you do if two of your best friends went to the movies without inviting you?

If my two best friends went to the movies without me, I would feel very upset. First, I  would go and see what movie they went to. If it was a good movie, I would either call and yell at them or go to the movies and make a big scene about it. If it wasn't a good movie, then I wouldn't really care. But lets say it was a good movie and I go to the movie theater. Then I would go and sit next to them and do a sneak attack, which would scare them a lot and I would be laughing at them for getting so scared easily. In conclusion, I would get mad at them, but I would get them back in the end.

"Notes from a Bottle" Ambiguity Paragraph.

In "Notes from a Bottle," James Stevenson's use of ambiguity engages the reader. For example, the narrator writes,  “There is still no explanation for the flood” during the party.  This shows that it’s ambiguous because you want to know where the flood is coming from.  This also shows that people are going to continue reading to find out on what happens. In addition, the narrator also writes "Cheerful voices can be heard echoing in the fire stairs" before the party. This shows that it keeps the reader entertained because they don't know why they are happy and partying when something so bad is going on. This also shows that the reader is going to want to know why they are partying instead of worrying for their lives. In conclusion, this story is very ambiguous, and it is going to motivate the reader to read more.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 15

Cell phones are not safe to use while driving. For example, somebody told me that they were driving in a lane and all of a sudden this lady comes and drives right in front of her and almost hitting her, also this lady was one the phone talking to someone. Honestly  I can RELATE to this person, because it can be very frustrating when someone is not paying attention and you could get hurt very badly. In addition, a lot of people ASSESS that no one  should talk and text and drive at the same time. This shows that the government should enforce the CONCEPT of no talking/texting while driving. In conclusion, people should not text/talk and drive at the same time unless if it was an emergency.

If you could only take 3 people with you on a trip around the world, who would you take and why?

The three people that I would take with me around the world are: Sabrina, Brittany B. and Jessica K. They are like family to me and it would be really fun to go with them.  We would first go to New Zealand, I have heard many stories that it is very beautiful. The second place we would go to is Greece, so that we can go and sail through the Greek islands. After that, we would go Ireland, because the people are very friendly and have a lot of green rolling hills. Then, we would go to the Caribbean's and enjoy the lovely scenery and try new foods.

What would happen if you woke up in another country and no one could understand you?

I woke up in another country and no one understood me. First I would get up and look at my surroundings. If it was a locked up prison cell, then I would look for a way out or look for somebody that would try let me know where I'm at. If it was a room and a door in it, then I would see if it was open. If it was, then I would walk out and see if somebody could tell me wear I'm at. Once I find someone, then I would draw something out for them and see if they could understand me. If they understand me, then I would see if they can tell me some info on how to get me home, or see why I'm here, in this place. After they give me some of the info that they now, then I would see what I would do. In conclusion, I would use a series of choices to find my answer out of my situation.

Middle of the lake

What would you do if you were in the middle of the lake and your boat began to leak?

If I was in the middle of the lake and my boat started to leak, I would get very irritated. First, I would look for something that would cover the hole and stop the leak. If that didn't work then I would try and get to the shore of the lake. When I can't reach the shore and the water is getting too high, then I would jump out and swim to the shore. Once I reached the shore, I would look at the boat and feel sad, for they're was all of my stuff in it and I would probably never see it again. In conclusion, I would bring something that will stop a leak or leaks the next time I go out in the middle of a lake. 

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 10

Should women be required to register for the Selective Service. For example, people have VOICED for their opinions and women should not be forced to do things they don’t want. This shows that people do not agree with women being required to register to the draft. This also shows that even though women are equal as men, they don't always have to share the same responsibilities. In addition, there are a lot of FACTORS that bring up problems for the women to have to register for the draft or even sign up for the military. This shows that a lot of men have PLOTTED to kidnap women when and rape them. This also shows that men would give women a lot of sexual-harassment because they think that women aren't worthy enough and that they are lower then them. In conclusion, women should not be required to register for the draft.

If someone cut in front of me

If someone got in front of me while I was in line at the movies, I would be very mad. For example, I would tap that person on the shoulder and tell them how I felt, which would be that I am very upset for you cutting me while I was in the line. This shows that if this person doesn't listen to me than I would have to force them to move. This also shows that if I can't force this person to move then we're fighting. In addition, if this person does move when I ask them nicely, then I wouldn't have to do anything bad. This shows that nothing bad would happen. This also shows that this person was willing to co-operate with me and go back to whever that person was standing in line. In conclusion, there are two ways this problem could end, good or bad.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 9

Junk food should not be banned from high school vending machines. For example, in the PREVIOUS years, like 2001 before the banning on junk food vending machines, the vending machines earned $214,000 in profits, msnbc.com reports. This year, they've only earned $17,000. This shows that companies wont be able to get profit from their consumers. This also shows that there STRATEGY plan might not work, because they wont get enough money from their consumers. In addition, a lot of adults say that there are ALTERNATIVE foods to eat. This shows that adults don't pay attention then they say they do. This also shows that students can't always eat some of those healthy foods, because they are possibly allergic to them or they just don't like them, In conclusion, adults say that junk food in vending machines should be banned, but a lot of people disagree with that thought.

Bugs in my Salad

What would you do if you saw little bugs in your salad?

If they were bugs in my salad, I would be very grossed out. I would tell them and ask for another salad or for my money back and I will make sure they will give me at least one of those two things. Then I would leave that place and never go there ever again. After that I would tell my friends and other people that I know and tell them about what had happened at the restaurant and hopefully that they wont eat there either. In conclusion, I would never go to that place if I found bugs in my salad or in any of my food, including drinks.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 8

The Ten Commandments do not belong in public schools. For example, religious groups can CONSUME  students and convince them of doing things that could be against their own religion. This shows that not everybody who does a religion is good. This also shows that there are different CATEGORIES of religion. In addition, some parents will come by and complain about their children learning different religions and how it is their ROLE to teach them religion. This shows that people should not interfere with students religion. This also shows that parents could have their children transfer to another school, and that would make it look bad for the school and the school district. Overall, public schools should not include the Ten Commandments nor religion. 

Finding gold in my backyard.

If I found gold in my backyard, I would go and find someone to see if they can find out if it is real. Then I would see how much I can exchange it for, or sell it. If it is worth a lot then I would get the money and I would go and buy stuff that I need. After I buy the stuff I need, then I would buy other things that I want and donate some of the money to places and people. If I still have a lot of that money left, then I would save it and put it into my bank or pay off loans and bills that I need to pay for. In conclusion, I would sell the gold and make sure I have a lot of money for things that I need and want.

Living under water

If everyone lived under water, then there would be good and bad things about that. For example, there would have to be more expensive under water gear, such as breathing and eating instruments, and different things that people could wear, since they can't wear the same thing all the time and how they are going to wash themselves. This shows that it would be very close to impossible living, but there are still things that will make it possible. In conclusion, living under water sounds really cool and fun, but it is a very complex way of living, unless you were a mermaid or a sea animal. 

Lost in the woods and it got dark

If I was lost in the woods and it got dark, I would go and find the nearest tree. Then I would check it and make sure there is nothing dangerous. Then I would try to climb it so that way I will be safe. When I reach the top, I would check if there is anything in there, like bugs, animals, birds, etc. After that, I would go to sleep and try to wake up once there is light out. Once there is light out then I would climb down out of the tree and try to find my way out of the woods and to shelter. In conclusion, I would try to avoid being in the woods during the night time, and make sure that someone is with me, especially if they have experience in the woods.

Live anywhere in the World

If I could live anywhere in the world, I would live at New Zealand. It is a very beautiful place to live and has a lot of exciting Sceneries to go and see. For example, New Zealand has a lot of different types of scenery and geographical areas. This shows that not all of the scenery is the same, so you wont get bored there. This also shows that you can do a lot of different things from all of the different geographical areas. In addition, they have a lot of fun sports that I would like to go and try. This shows that New zealand is a very fun and active place. This also shows that people need to be a little ore care-free about things and relax and have fun. In conclusion, New Zealand is the place I would like to go live.

Taller than the Trees

If I grew taller than the trees, then that would change my life a lot. For example, it would be very hard for me to hide, especially if the government was after me. This shows that I am a very tall person. This also shows that the government are very suspicious people, and if they see something that is not normal, then they would try to capture it to test and examine it, or to destroy it. For instance, people would have to look up to me instead of me looking up to them. This shows that I wont be short anymore. This also shows that I could also have more of an advantage in a lot of things. I could over-look a lot of things, (over trees) and I could beat a lot of people in a lot of sports. In conclusion, I would not like to be taller than the trees because, even though I would have some advantages, I would have a lot of disadvantages as well.

If I could walk on walls and ceilings

If I could walk on walls and ceilings then that would probably make my life a little better. For example, if  I couldn't reach something, or if I couldn't hang something up, then I would use my ability to do those things. This shows that my ability can be useful and that I might be able to help people out. In addition, I might be able to save people if they are in trouble. This shows that I might be able to become famous like super heroes. This also shows that I am a very helpful person and that I am kind hearted. In conclusion, if I could walk on walls and ceilings, then it would help me and other people in a lot of situations.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 5

Vaccinations should be required for all students. For example, in the 1920's there was a ESTIMATE of children getting diphtheria and then doctors started vaccinating children for that in the 1930’s and then they barely started seeing that illness. This shows that there will be a POSITIVE sign in this century that their wont be a lot of dangerous diseases. This also shows why doctors do vaccinations for children. In addition, doctors can ILLUSTRATE that all the vaccinations are free if you have medi-cal, and it just takes a few minutes of your day. This shows that you don't have to pay. This also shows that you can't use the excuse that vaccinations are too expensive. In conclusion, children should get vaccinations, unless if they are allergic.

Co-Operate

If people never co-operated, the world would be in chaos. For example, if no one ever co-operated then people would get hurt. This shows that people would start stealing things and other people might get hurt sometimes. This also shows that people will get frustrated. In addition, no one will be able to get anything done.This shows that people would get selfish. This also shows that people will get frustrated and might start doing things that aren't good. In conclusion, people should co-operate, even if you don't like someone, and as hard as it is, you still have to co-operate.

My favorite time of the day

My favorite time of the day is night time. For example, when it is night time I feel more alive. This shows that I prefer the night then the day. This also shows that I can do more tings at night tome. In addition, I'm not a morning person and I usually can't function well in the morning either. This shows that I have trouble during the morning then the night. This also shows that during night time, I can think about things, and it is also the time to sleep. In conclusion, night is my favorite time of the day, and it is not as hot the day during day time.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 4

The pressure of teen sports has gone too far. For example, scientists are looking into SIGNIFICANT information, that coaches are asking the students to practice before school. This shows that students are  being CONSTRUCTED more then they should. This also shows that practicing too much in the morning might tire them and they might not stay up during school. In addition scientists have IDENTIFIED which teens that will have behavior problems because there is too much pressure from playing sports. This shows that scientists look at who is being depressed and also slacking on their grades. This also shows that some teens will start doing bad things like drinking and stuff. In conclusion, I think that the pressure of teen sports has gone way too far.

If all the streets were rivers

If all they were rivers instead of streets, then that is a bad and a good thing. For example, people would think of it as a beautiful scenery if other people took good care of it. This shows that a lot of areas would get more money from tourism. This also shows that people wont drive as much and there wont be to much pollution. In addition, people might start slacking on their jobs of taking care of the rivers. This shows that people possibly get lazy and things might grow in the rivers and it might get dangerous for people. This also shows that there is a more of a possibility for a shark or a alligator to attack someone (depending where the rivers are connected to). In conclusion, I think that having rivers instead of streets is a pretty awesome idea, and there is a possibility for me to ride a boat.

Cows giving root beer instead of milk

If cows gave root beer instead of milk it would be a bad and good thing. For example, it would be very hard to find milk.This shows that it is a very complex situation. This also shows that some people need milk because they might have low calcium and that is possibly one of the few ways for them to get their calcium. In addition, cows giving root bear instead of milk is good to. This shows that it wont be as complicating to make and it will be less expensive. This also shows that root bear is more natural if cows gave them out instead of milk, so people wont say anything. In conclusion, cows not giving milk and giving root bear has its pros and cons.

Paperless Classroom Orientation Unit Assessment

Rachel S.

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JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 3

I think that parents should regulate their children's diet. For example, parents have to stop buying their children junk food and buy more APPROPRIATE food for their health. This shows that parents have to be more responsible and have more FOCUS on their children. This also shows that parents need to read the ingredients and research what a lot of the food CONSISTS of these days. In addition, kids who eat unhealthy when their younger tend to have a lot more health problems when they're growing up. This shows that kids also have to take part of taking care of themselves. This also shows that parents have to keep an eye on what they eat. In conclusion, I think that parents should have the right to change their children's diet and make them more healthier.

Choices - Week 3

If I could fly, I would go to all of the places in the world that I would want to go to. I would fly as much as I could, and strengthen my wings. I would go to Japan first. Once I go to Japan I would try to learn how to speak Japanese and try to do different things there that I probably never heard of doing. After Japan I would go to New Zealand. At New Zealand I would enjoy the scenery there, look at the beautiful mountain and try different foods there. Once I leave New Zealand I would go to Brazil. When I arrive to Brazil I would go to the amazon forest and look at all the different types of animals and fruits there. Those are all the places I would want to visit, even if I don't have wings I'd still want to visit those three places.

English 10 Academic Vocabulary Paragraph

People should go to jail for harrasing people whether it's from TEXT message or a social networking sight. For example, this article that I found on the internet is about this lady who was reading a section in a magazine, she went to the website that she saw in the section, and it was a website of people posting pictures of different girls and people commenting rude things about them. This shows that people are very disrespectful. This also shows that people will get AFFECTED by how other people talk about them. In addition to the article, people will put things on the internet just to get back at other people. This shows that people can't be mature enough to handle situations properly. This also shows that people need to MAINTAIN themselves so that way they wont go to jail. In conclusion, I think that people should not harass other people and if they do then they should go to jail.

Nouns Collage

Week 1 vocab paragraph

Video-game makers do not have the right to sell violent video games to minors. Scientists ANALYZE that violent games directly reward violent behavior, such as by awarding points, so kids will try to be bad because they think its good. School shootings, and increase in bullying are DERIVED from violent video games. It’s a fun pastime for most guys and some girls because it can relieve stress but through further EXAMINATION it increases more violent tendencies in a minor. That is why game makers should not sell violent video games so that the rate of bullying and school shootings may decrease.

Portfolio - Future

I feel that my future will be awesome and that I will succeed my goals. My goals in my future are to graduate high school, UCSD and med-school and become a heart surgeon. I haven't had much of previous experiences to prepare me to become a doctor. I need to have good grades such as: A's and B's and be positive in life. My teachers, family, friends and I will help me to achieve my goals. I do genially believe I can achieve my goals because I'm smart and I have the tools to help me go far in life.

Prom 2012 Blog Post

When we first arrived at Sea World I was excited and ready to dance and party. When we arrived at the tide pools, I was amazed at the sight of all of the star fishes and how they were multi-colored and they’re are a lot of them to. During dinner, they gave us food and it was really good. They gave us chicked with chicken alfrado. While I was dancing, I felt a little bit uncomfortable, because I'm not used to dancing in front of people and I felt like people were staring at me, so I just sat down most of the night. By the end of the night, I felt tired since it was a long day, and by the time we got back it was midnight, and once I got to my room I just fell asleep.

Romeo & Juliet - Love at First Sight

I do not believe in love at first sight, but, there is an attraction at first, possibly lust, which is what a lot of people mistaken for love. For example, my sister Nikki and her husband met at the SPCA in Canada, which was where my other sister worked at. At first they hated each other, but then they grew to like each other. Then they started to go out with each other and then they got married. Another example is my Aunty Linda and Uncle St. John (pronounced as Sinjin). They met at a park, it was when her dog ran away and he went and got him for her. They started talking and getting to know each other, then they got married and were together for a very long time, now he's dead so they can't really be happy with each other. Romeo and Juliet's love is not sincere because they don't know each other yet and they don't know what they're getting each other into.

Academic Language Week 33 - American Students

Cell phones should be allowed in schools. One reason is that kids who are mature and have good grades should be allowed more privileges such as having your phones out but not using them when the teacher is teaching but you can also check it temporarily. Another reason is that there might be an emergency and they might need to answer it. Lastly, they might need to use their phones in an classroom activity and have to participate in the activity. In conclusion, students should be allowed to use their cell phones during school.

Personal Changes Blog Paragraph

At the beginning of my freshman year, I was more shy. Now, I am less shy and don't get embarrassed easily when being around people. For example, when people would talk to me it would be hard for me to talk to them back. This shows that I was a very shy person. This also shows that it was hard for me to talk to people. In addition, I am more around people that I didn't really know before and I am more talkative to people. This shows that now I am talking to more people. This also shows that I have more friends. By my senior year, I hope to be more talkative and get along with more people.

Academic Language Week 37 - Unhealthy Meal Choices

The fast food industry should not be allowed to target kids with unhealthy meal choices. One reason is that there is a THEORY that if you eat a lot of junk food, you can get a heart attack at an early age. Another reason is that there is a SECTION of people with an illness and they can’t eat unhealthy foods. Lastly, some fast food places are SIMILAR to other fast food places, but they are unhealthier and have less healthy food options to choose from. In conclusion, a lot of people think that the fast food industry shouldn't be allowed to target kids with unhealthy food choices.

SPA Policy Blog Paragraph

One policy that I wish could change is that girls should have guy CASA's. Currently, this policy states that girls  can not have males as their CASA's. One reason it should be changed is that guys get female CASA's while girls can't have male CASA's, which is sexist. Another reason is that a lot of girls need to trust a male so that way they know the male wont hurt them. In order for girls to trust males they need a male CASA to be a positive role model and lead by example. If this policy was changed, I would have a male CASA, but my CASA is already awesome so I wouldn't get rid of her.

Academic Language Week 35 - Sweatshops

Sweatshops are a violation to human rights. One reason is that they have to go through hard LABOR with their bosses and yet they don’t get paid enough. Another reason is that they should not have APPLIED for a job that won’t pay for their rent and their other resources such as bills, food, their children's needs, etc. Lastly, some people had to finish their CONTRACTS that were made with other people. Sometimes they make contracts for money loans or their rent needed to get paid. In conclusion people who work at sweatshops are an violation to their own rights.

Academic Update Blog Paragraph

My career goal is to  become a heart surgeon when I grow up and finish schooling. This job involves me graduating high school, college, and med school. I know this will take a lot of years of schooling but it will be worth it in the long run .I want to do this because ever since I could remember, I wanted to help people when they got hurt. I will achieve this goal by having good grades, not letting people get in my way and paying attention in school. I will remain motivated to become a heart surgeon by always wanting to care for people and not faint at the sight of blood.

Academic Language Week 33 - American Students

Cell phones should be allowed in schools and during class. One good reason about phones is that they could be useful by looking up things faster then a computer, but in CONTRAST kids could be on face book or text messaging to their friends. Another reason is that the CRITIQUE about this situation is that students with good grades and who are mature deserve privileges such as having their phones in school. Lastly, I would want to PERSUADE someone who dressage with phones not being allowed in school. In conclusion, students should be allowed to use their cell phones during school.

Spelling Words List 34

Spelling Words List 34

Academic Language Week 33 - American Students

American students are falling behind academically compared to the students in other countries. One reason is that there has been DATA on student drop outs being more recent then it was in the past couple of years. Another reason is that COMPARED to the other countries, we are less advanced in technology then the countries who are have more advanced technology then the countries who don't. Lastly, the RANGE of teachers who are not as educated as the teachers in different countries who give out more education. That is why American students in America are failing then the other countries which are more advanced.

Ironic Story Blog Post

Once upon a time there was a lady called Natalie Priester, who was a teacher. While she was taking a shower, her phone started ringing saying she got an email, and that email said that there was no work today. But Natalie P. did not pay attention to her phone because she was in the shower. After that, she got ready and went to work. When she got to her work she realized that nobodies car was there. 'Hmm...' she thought 'I guess I'm early then.' So she went into the Tech Center and went into her classroom and got it ready for the kids of her first period. While she sat on her chair she decided to do some of her own work for yearbook. As hours passed she soon realized that there must have been no work today and that she did not check her email, she was very upset that she did not check her email and that she was too lazy to go check it after her shower.

Study Spelling Words List 33

Study Spelling Words List 33

Academic Language Week 32 - Exit Exam

A student should have to pass a high school exit exam in order to earn a high school diploma and to get a well paying job. One reason is for children to OBTAIN higher academic performance in their classes. Another reason is to DISTRIBUTE scores fairly among California for the students who are disabled and who are not disabled. Lastly, children's academic skills VARY in each subject. This can highlight their strengths and weaknesses in subjects they can or can not do. In conclusion, students have to pass the exit exam in order to pass school, get a diploma, and get a well paying job.

Academic Language Week 31 - Teen Vandals

Parents of teen vandals should not be held responsible for their child's damage. One reason is that parents need to be more SPECIFIC to their children. If parents are not specific with their kids then the kids might be more trouble for the citizen’s properties. Another reason is that kids need to ACHIEVE a job, so that way they won’t be destructive towards other people’s property. Lastly, parents need to COMPUTE to their children's needs. If parents do not compute their children's needs then they will be very destructive and will not do well in their lives. Teen’s vandalism should not be the parent’s responsibility.

Spelling Words List 31

Spelling Words List 31

Spring Break Blog Paragraph

During spring break, I spent the whole time with Natalie playing games with her online. Some of the games we played were Words with Friends, Scramble with Friends, and Legend Cards. Something I also did during spring break was network on Facebook. What I did on Facebook was play games and talk to old friends. Then I went to Walmart with Natalie and spent ten dollars on food. Some of the things I did buy were a 24 pack of Coke-a-Cola for eight dollars and a bag of Hot Cheetos for two dollars. By the end of the week, I also spent 20 dollars on junk food, which was at the 99 Cent Store. Other then that, I got a lot of rest. I wished that spring break was a little longer because I had a lot of fun.

Academic Language Week 30 - "D" Grades

There are many different reasons why that schools should eliminate "D" grades. One reason is that it could help students COMPENSATE their grades into better grades, and it would give them more of a challenge to do their work and study. Another reason is that when students go to school, they might get a 'D' in their INITIAL period, which is why they should study more in school. Lastly, if they eliminate 'D' grades it would help students to INTERACT and communicate with each other. In conclusion, if schools eliminate 'D' grades then it would help students get better grades.

Spelling Words Second Semster Midterm

Spelling Words Second Semster Midterm

Academic Language Week 29 - School Conferences

 There are many different reasons why parents should not go to jail for missing their child's school conference. One reason is that school responsibilities should not be TRANSFERRED to the parents. Another reason is that the RESOURCE where kids live might affect their behavior in school and it could cause a lot of problems. Lastly, when parents do jail time when they don't go to their child's school conference, they have to SEEK someone to watch their kid and that costs a lot of money and a lot of people aren't willing to do that. That is why parents should not go to jail for missing their child's school conference.

Trayvon Martin Paragraph

George Zimmerman should be charged with murder for shooting Trayvon Martin. One reason is that Trayvon seemed to be a innocent victim because he did not do anything wrong. Another reason is that George Zimmerman shot him because he was a different race, he had his hood on in the rain and walking alone. Lastly, I think that people should not murder other people; even if it's for self defense, even if they are doing something wrong, instead of killing them they should of shot them in the leg. That is why I think that George Zimmerman should be charged with murder for shooting Trayvon Martin.

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Spelling Words List 29

Academic Language Week 28 - Global Positioning System (GPS)

I think that the Global Positioning System (GPS) devices should not be required for habitually truant students. One reason is that a lot of students have the ELEMENT to not have a GPS on them, and it will take them out of their element. Another reason is that students have CONDUCTED a way to do school and learn, but having a GPS on them can be very distracting. Lastly, the ADMINISTER'S way of tracking kids with a GPS on them is a very bad idea, they should have more security or cameras to track down kids who are truant or ditching class. That is why I think the GPS devices should not be required for truant students.

Rain, Vacation, or Zombies vs Vampires Blog Post Paragraph

My dream vacation would to go to Hawaii. One reason is that there is a huge volcano, and knowing the fact that it would erupt and that I could die in any minute is so awesome. Another reason is that I would like to swim by the waterfalls there, because it is really sparkly and clean. Lastly, it is a really good place to have a honeymoon at. You can have many different activities to do their too. You can go swimming, scuba-diving, trying out new foods, learning new dances and see different types of musical instruments. That is why my dream vacation would be to go to Hawaii.

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Academic Language Week 27 - Drug-Sniffing Dogs

There are many different reasons why schools allow drug-sniffing dogs onto their campus and let them sniff the kids and their bags. One reason is that a lot of people would ASSUME that kids bring drugs on the campus. Another reason is that people have gone through the PROCESS on making their school so it would be the people who own the school's property, and they would have the right to bring drug-sniffing dogs onto their school. Lastly, some people RESPOND to getting accused with drugs, so they will get angry. That is why their are many different reasons why schools allow drug-sniffing dogs onto their campus.

Testing Thoughts Paragraph

When I do take the CAHSEE I hope to feel good about taking the California High School Exit Exam (CAHSEE). I know that I have to study really hard in order to pass it and graduate from school. I am a little concerned that I might have not studied enough in order to pass the CAHSEE. I am confident that I will be able to have enough time to study and pass the California High School Exit Exam. When I see my CAHSEE scores, I hope to feel satisfied that I was able to pass, comfortable with my score, and wonderful that I can graduate high school.

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Poetry Assessment Project

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Academic Language Week 2 - Cars

I would want a car that drives itself. One reason is the OCCURRENCE that some people have disabilities and can't drive their own car, it would help them if the car could drive itself so they can get to their destination. Another METHOD is because there would be less accidents, technology is smarter than humans and can be a little bit more reliable. Lastly the PROCEED would be more efficient to use electric cars, they would take up energy and not gas. This is way I would prefer a car that drives it self but there is many more reasons.

Homonyms Practice Blog Paragraph

Derek stumbled into the kitchen wearing a apron and boxers. There was a huge tic on his leg. They're brown with black spots on their backs. Then he was talking to his friend, James, on the phone and Derek said, "Those are your tics that are on my leg and all over my house!" Then James came over to take back his tics. "Now you're in my house!" Derek cried, "I came to take back my tics." James said calmly, "Now help me put back my tics". As they were done putting back the tics, these two beautiful ladies came by and stole all of his friends' tics. "Oh no!" James screamed. "Well we don't have to worry about your tics escaping." Derek said. THE END.

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Spelling List 26

Academic Language Week 25 - Concealed Handguns

There are many different reasons why adults should not carry concealed handguns. One reason is that there was a NFL player and he went to a club and someone bumped into him and he shot himself in his foot, so that JUSTIFIED that there is a law that adults should not carry concealed handguns. Another reason is that it may INDICATE to people because the adult that is possessing the gun might not have it hidden all the way. Lastly, the law might want to ESTABLISHED the rule about adults should carry concealed handguns. That is why there are many different reasons on adults should not carry concealed handguns.

technology, reflection Technology in School Paragraph

Teachers use technology to help me learn. For example, in 4th grade, my teacher used a projector to teach us how to use computers. Also, in 6th grade, my teacher used an old computer and disassembled it and she put it back together and showing us how to out it back together in case we need to take apart a computer and put it back together. In addition, in 9th grade, my teacher let us use computer to do warmups & classwork, and we have to use computers to do our homework. Future teachers can help their students to learn by using more advanced technology, and being more patient.

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Academic Language Week 24 - Online Learning

There are many different reasons why online learning is an effective way to get students educated. One reason is that a lot of people differentiate between typing on a computer and writing on a piece of paper. Another reason is that a lot of people prefer to be in their comfortable area while they do their work. Lastly, other people can clarify that it is better for them to work on their class work or homework at home instead of going to school and being rushed to do things that's too fast for them. That is why there are many different reasons why students getting more educated by online learning.

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Academic Language Week 23 - Dog Fighting

There are many different reasons why betting on dogs to fight should be illegal. One reason is that animal cruelty is DISTINCT to the way we treat our pets at home because we wouldn't want anything bad to happen to them because they're like our family. Another reason is that a lot of dog owners have a FORMULA of what they are going to do to their dog after the dogs fight, whether it being that they won or they lost. Lastly, dogs don't have the POTENTIAL to speak up for themselves. That is why I think that dog fighting should be illegal.

Imagery in Poetry Blog Post Paragraph

    An unhappy day I had was when I got a new, free skateboard and some old man in San Diego stole it. I was in Salvation Army and then this old man came in and he took my skateboard when nobody was paying attention to him. I was looking at the magazine I was holding and I got really into it. Since I ate Peanut butter and bread earlier I kept on tasting and smelling the previous food that I ate. I was hearing my mom talking to the assistant, and then the old man came in.  The feelings I had felt from my skateboard being stolen were sad at first, but then I got over it because that man might have needed it so he could sell it and get money for food.

Academic Language Week 22 - Felons Voting

There are many different reasons why felons should have the right to vote. One reason is that they could have a very COMPLEX way of thinking, and it could help people make better decisions on what they are trying to decide. Another reason is that they could have RELEVANT ideas, which include the justice system, or the prison they are in right now. Lastly, they could have a SOURCE of knowledge in their mind, which could link to helping out the process of voting or decision making for the country. That is why I think that felonies should have the right to vote.

Poetry Previous Knowledge Paragraph

I have experienced poetry by seeing and hearing my sister read and talk about poetry. When I was in elementary school I was never really a fan of poetry but if it was part of my school; I would try my best on writing poetry or anything close to poetry. When I was in middle school I still wasn't a fan of poetry but like I said earlier, I would still write poetry if it was school related. Outside of school I did nothing close to poetry, actually, I hated poetry and still do. This year I hope to have nothing to do with poetry except for participating in poetry slam with Grandma Jean. 

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Academic Language Week 21 - Steroids

Steroids should not be allowed in sports for many, many reasons. One reason is that there is a certain time PERIOD for taking steroids, and if you take it a lot it can ruin your health. Another reason is that a lot of popular athletes  like Alex Rodriguez and  Mike Piazza  were PRIMARY athletes, but, they got caught from doing steroids so they were fired. Lastly, steroids ruin baseball because baseball have been an important TRADITION and steroids make it unfair. That is why I think that steroids should not be included in the bodies of athletes, because they are cheating.

Second Semester 2012 Goals

My goal for the second semester of the 2011-2012 school year is to at least have no D's or F's. I selected this goal because I want to go to a four year college, and I just care for my grades so that way I wont be a failure in life. I will concur this goal by getting to school on time, doing my class work and homework, and also by participating in the school activities. I have been trying very hard in trying in keeping up my grades, and it matters  to me a lot. At the end of the semester, I will know I achieved my goal by being in a four year college when I grow up and having the confidence in myself, and knowing that  I have achieved my goals.

First Semester Projects

Plot Reading Assessment Project:
http://rachelspa2015.blogspot.com/2011/09/beautiful-mermaid.html
Character Reading Assessment Project:
http://rachelspa2015.blogspot.com/2011/10/dia-de-los-muertos-pick-person.html
Narrator Reading Assessment Project :
http://rachelspa2015.blogspot.com/2011/11/narrator-assessment-project.html
Symbolism Reading Assessment Project:
http://rachelspa2015.blogspot.com/2012/01/rock-symbolizes-my-mom-because-everyone.html
Narrative Essay:
http://rachelspa2015.blogspot.com/2011/10/dia-de-los-muertos-pick-person.html
Persuasive Essay:
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1PrRyaqjh6PR_sNrdrvH0V-87GOAgmvD3PqpEYoJojJI

Symbolism String Sentences

 

1. The rock symbolizes my mom because everyone would rely on her.
2. The iPod symbolizes my sister Nicki because when I was younger  she let me have her iPod and we both have very similar taste in music
3. The book symbolizes my sister because she loves to read books.
4. The Popsicle stick represents me becoming a doctor when I grow up.
5. The boogy board symbolizes me because because like to boogy board.
6. The Christmas  lights represent me of being unique and out of ordinary.

Study Spelling Words List 20 - Final Exam

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Persuasive Essay: Opinion Statement Brainstorm

1. Self-passes
2. curfew
3. food
4. making kids participate in contests that they don't want to do
5. facebook

Which of these opinion statements should I select for my essay? Why?

Dragons' Den First Semester Week 18: Free Choice

I decided to write about kickboxing, I've always wanted to do kickboxing, and still do. One reason I like kickboxing is because my sister use to do it and she sometimes would teach me a little bit about kickboxing. Another reason that I like kickboxing is because it is for self-defense, so if somebody would try to come out and kill me one day, I can always just show them what I got. Lastly, I like kickboxing because sometimes it's just fun to kick or punch something. That is why I decided to write about kickboxing, and that is also why I like it so much.

JCCS Academic Language Week 18 - Teen Drivers Interview

James thinks teen drivers should have special restrictions placed on their drivers' licenses because teenagers don't always have the best judgment for themselves, let alone traffic laws.

Sarah thinks teen drivers should have special restrictions placed on their drivers' licenses because teenagers don't have enough experience behind the wheel.

Peter thinks teen drivers should  have special restrictions placed on their drivers' licenses because I don't think most teenagers are mature enough to not be distracted and drive safely.

Academic Language Week 18 - Teen Drivers

There are different reasons about teen drivers not having special restrictions on their drivers' license. One reason is that when some people ACQUIRE their drivers license, since they should  be able  to have that freedom  instead of having all of those restrictions on their drivers' license. Another reason is that a lot of teen drivers CONCLUDE their tests by doing everything properly. Lastly, it is in a lot of people's CULTURE to have more freedom and less restrictions on their drivers' license. That is why there are different reasons about teen drivers not having special restrictions on their drivers' license.

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Dragons' Den First Semester Week 17: Free Choice

I decided to write about kickboxing, I've always wanted to do kickboxing, and still do. One reason I like kickboxing is because my sister use to do it and she sometimes would teach me a little bit about kickboxing. Another reason that I like kickboxing is because it is for self-defense, so if somebody would try to come out and kill me one day, I can always just show them what I got. Lastly, I like kickboxing because sometimes it's just fun to kick or punch something. That is why I decided to write about kickboxing, and that is also why I like it so much.

Academic Language Week 17 - China

There are many different opinions that the imports from China to the United States are a bad idea. One fact is that some people or businesses use child labor as their FUNCTION. I fell that is very wrong because it's torturous and it takes away their education opportunities. Another fact is that if the United States imports more than they EXPORT then it would hurt our economy. Lastly, sometimes China products might not  be the best quality that they IMPORT to us. There are many different opinions that the imports from China to the United States is not a good idea.

Study Spelling Words List 17

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Cyberbullying Perspectives

1. They could feel bad and help out 
2. They could tell the bully to stop
3. They could go tell a teacher
4. They could call the police
5. They could give the target advice
6. They could stand up to the bully
7. They could get an adult
8. They could go talk to the bully about it
9. They could have the bully and the target talk to each other
10. They could  ask advice from an adult