Thursday, August 30, 2012

Week 1 vocab paragraph

Video-game makers do not have the right to sell violent video games to minors. Scientists ANALYZE that violent games directly reward violent behavior, such as by awarding points, so kids will try to be bad because they think its good. School shootings, and increase in bullying are DERIVED from violent video games. It’s a fun pastime for most guys and some girls because it can relieve stress but through further EXAMINATION it increases more violent tendencies in a minor. That is why game makers should not sell violent video games so that the rate of bullying and school shootings may decrease.



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  1. You're right Rachel, everything you said in this paragraph was true and it is very wrong.

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