Sunday, September 18, 2011

The Beautiful Mermaid

                                                               Exposition

One day John was skateboarding to his favorite spot in the mid-afternoon. That particular spot is the cliff. As he was getting nearer to his favorite spot he was suppose to stop but he wasn't paying attention, and once he realizes that it was to late to stop his skateboard, he trips, rips his ligament in his right ankle and falls off the cliff.

                                                       Rising Action
John wakes up to hearing to a far-off to sleep, then all of a sudden he feels something grab his left ankle, 'something scaly and slimy' John thought. Then before he knew it, he was underwater and unconscious. John wakes up to a beautiful mermaid staring down at him. She had long blond hair, and a beautiful multi-colored tail. Soon he realizes that one, he's underwater, two, his right ankle was healed. "Thank you" John said, "You're welcome John" said the beautiful mermaid said, "How did you know my name?" John asked, "Us mermaids have mythical powers help us out in a lot of things, without our powers we would die" she said, "What is your name, if you don't mind me asking?" asked John, "It's Frankie" said the beautiful mermaid, "some, and let me introduce you to my family." said Frankie.

                                                              Conclusion
As Frankie and John get to the mermaid castle, they see her family eating John's ex-girlfriend, Alicia. Once they see John they go after him. They chase Frankie and John into the dark depths of the ocean where there's alot of scary dangerous sea animals. "I think we lost them" panted Frankie, but sadly she was wrong, they grab Frankie and pull her away while the rest of the mermaid family corner John. 'What do I do, what do I do? thought John panicky. Eventually, he feels this surge of strange power, then he turns into a mermaid with a pink tail, and fights the mermaid family. In the end John marries Frankie, then he remembers his ex-girlfriend at home ((flashback) John and Alicia broke up after he caught her cheating on him. (back to the present) John lived happily ever after with his beautiful wife, Frankie.

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