JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 5

Vaccinations should be required for all students. For example, in the 1920's there was a ESTIMATE of children getting diphtheria and then doctors started vaccinating children for that in the 1930’s and then they barely started seeing that illness. This shows that there will be a POSITIVE sign in this century that their wont be a lot of dangerous diseases. This also shows why doctors do vaccinations for children. In addition, doctors can ILLUSTRATE that all the vaccinations are free if you have medi-cal, and it just takes a few minutes of your day. This shows that you don't have to pay. This also shows that you can't use the excuse that vaccinations are too expensive. In conclusion, children should get vaccinations, unless if they are allergic.

Co-Operate

If people never co-operated, the world would be in chaos. For example, if no one ever co-operated then people would get hurt. This shows that people would start stealing things and other people might get hurt sometimes. This also shows that people will get frustrated. In addition, no one will be able to get anything done.This shows that people would get selfish. This also shows that people will get frustrated and might start doing things that aren't good. In conclusion, people should co-operate, even if you don't like someone, and as hard as it is, you still have to co-operate.

My favorite time of the day

My favorite time of the day is night time. For example, when it is night time I feel more alive. This shows that I prefer the night then the day. This also shows that I can do more tings at night tome. In addition, I'm not a morning person and I usually can't function well in the morning either. This shows that I have trouble during the morning then the night. This also shows that during night time, I can think about things, and it is also the time to sleep. In conclusion, night is my favorite time of the day, and it is not as hot the day during day time.

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 4

The pressure of teen sports has gone too far. For example, scientists are looking into SIGNIFICANT information, that coaches are asking the students to practice before school. This shows that students are  being CONSTRUCTED more then they should. This also shows that practicing too much in the morning might tire them and they might not stay up during school. In addition scientists have IDENTIFIED which teens that will have behavior problems because there is too much pressure from playing sports. This shows that scientists look at who is being depressed and also slacking on their grades. This also shows that some teens will start doing bad things like drinking and stuff. In conclusion, I think that the pressure of teen sports has gone way too far.

If all the streets were rivers

If all they were rivers instead of streets, then that is a bad and a good thing. For example, people would think of it as a beautiful scenery if other people took good care of it. This shows that a lot of areas would get more money from tourism. This also shows that people wont drive as much and there wont be to much pollution. In addition, people might start slacking on their jobs of taking care of the rivers. This shows that people possibly get lazy and things might grow in the rivers and it might get dangerous for people. This also shows that there is a more of a possibility for a shark or a alligator to attack someone (depending where the rivers are connected to). In conclusion, I think that having rivers instead of streets is a pretty awesome idea, and there is a possibility for me to ride a boat.

Cows giving root beer instead of milk

If cows gave root beer instead of milk it would be a bad and good thing. For example, it would be very hard to find milk.This shows that it is a very complex situation. This also shows that some people need milk because they might have low calcium and that is possibly one of the few ways for them to get their calcium. In addition, cows giving root bear instead of milk is good to. This shows that it wont be as complicating to make and it will be less expensive. This also shows that root bear is more natural if cows gave them out instead of milk, so people wont say anything. In conclusion, cows not giving milk and giving root bear has its pros and cons.

Paperless Classroom Orientation Unit Assessment

Rachel S.

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JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 3

I think that parents should regulate their children's diet. For example, parents have to stop buying their children junk food and buy more APPROPRIATE food for their health. This shows that parents have to be more responsible and have more FOCUS on their children. This also shows that parents need to read the ingredients and research what a lot of the food CONSISTS of these days. In addition, kids who eat unhealthy when their younger tend to have a lot more health problems when they're growing up. This shows that kids also have to take part of taking care of themselves. This also shows that parents have to keep an eye on what they eat. In conclusion, I think that parents should have the right to change their children's diet and make them more healthier.

Choices - Week 3

If I could fly, I would go to all of the places in the world that I would want to go to. I would fly as much as I could, and strengthen my wings. I would go to Japan first. Once I go to Japan I would try to learn how to speak Japanese and try to do different things there that I probably never heard of doing. After Japan I would go to New Zealand. At New Zealand I would enjoy the scenery there, look at the beautiful mountain and try different foods there. Once I leave New Zealand I would go to Brazil. When I arrive to Brazil I would go to the amazon forest and look at all the different types of animals and fruits there. Those are all the places I would want to visit, even if I don't have wings I'd still want to visit those three places.

English 10 Academic Vocabulary Paragraph

People should go to jail for harrasing people whether it's from TEXT message or a social networking sight. For example, this article that I found on the internet is about this lady who was reading a section in a magazine, she went to the website that she saw in the section, and it was a website of people posting pictures of different girls and people commenting rude things about them. This shows that people are very disrespectful. This also shows that people will get AFFECTED by how other people talk about them. In addition to the article, people will put things on the internet just to get back at other people. This shows that people can't be mature enough to handle situations properly. This also shows that people need to MAINTAIN themselves so that way they wont go to jail. In conclusion, I think that people should not harass other people and if they do then they should go to jail.