Thursday, March 7, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 26 - Cars

Cars should be able to drive themselves. For example, less car accidents would OCCUR. This shows that deaths would decrease. This also shows that people wont have traumas from car accidents. In addition, the company who made up the idea for a car that drives itself is a good METHOD. This shows that It can PROCEED on its own. This also shows that a person with a disability would be able to drive on their own. In conclusion, cars should be able to drive themselves.

2 comments:

  1. Rachel, I want you to work on finding specific facts from outside sources to use as your concrete details. This will prevent you from writing paragraphs filled with commentary. You have good ideas, but I want you to work on backing them up.

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