Thursday, February 14, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 23 - Dog Fighting

Dog fighting should be illegal. For example, dog fighting is a DISTINCT form of death and animal cruelty. This shows that there will be a lesser population of dogs if they continue to die. This also shows that dogs have really good POTENTIAL of hurting someone when they are taught to fight. In addition, there are many different FORMULA’S of abusing a dog when they lose. This shows that animal cruelty is getting out of control. This also shows that dogs could go through a lot of pain before they die. In conclusion, people should help out and stop dog fighting and make it stop forever.

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  1. Rachel, remember to find specific facts to support your commentaries which will strengthen your arguments.

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