Thursday, February 7, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 22

Felons should be allowed to vote. For example,  even though they do really bad things and get themselves into COMPLEX situations. This shows that if they didn't get themselves into a lot of trouble, then it would be easier for them to vote. This also shows that the government should start having more RELEVANT ideas to fix the conflict of weather felons should or shouldn't vote. In addition, there is a lot of SOURCE coming from the politics saying that they shouldn't let felons vote. This shows that everyone should be allowed to vote on weather felons could have the full rights from when they leave jail or prison. This also shows that even felons should have the right to vote. In conclusion, felons should be allowed to vote.

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  1. Rachel, work on adding factual concrete details to strengthen the ideas presented in your commentary. Also, remember that source means a person, book, or document that you get information from.

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