Academic Language Week 37 - Unhealthy Meal Choices

The fast food industry should not be allowed to target kids with unhealthy meal choices. One reason is that there is a THEORY that if you eat a lot of junk food, you can get a heart attack at an early age. Another reason is that there is a SECTION of people with an illness and they can’t eat unhealthy foods. Lastly, some fast food places are SIMILAR to other fast food places, but they are unhealthier and have less healthy food options to choose from. In conclusion, a lot of people think that the fast food industry shouldn't be allowed to target kids with unhealthy food choices.

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One policy that I wish could change is that girls should have guy CASA's. Currently, this policy states that girls  can not have males as their CASA's. One reason it should be changed is that guys get female CASA's while girls can't have male CASA's, which is sexist. Another reason is that a lot of girls need to trust a male so that way they know the male wont hurt them. In order for girls to trust males they need a male CASA to be a positive role model and lead by example. If this policy was changed, I would have a male CASA, but my CASA is already awesome so I wouldn't get rid of her.

Academic Language Week 35 - Sweatshops

Sweatshops are a violation to human rights. One reason is that they have to go through hard LABOR with their bosses and yet they don’t get paid enough. Another reason is that they should not have APPLIED for a job that won’t pay for their rent and their other resources such as bills, food, their children's needs, etc. Lastly, some people had to finish their CONTRACTS that were made with other people. Sometimes they make contracts for money loans or their rent needed to get paid. In conclusion people who work at sweatshops are an violation to their own rights.

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My career goal is to  become a heart surgeon when I grow up and finish schooling. This job involves me graduating high school, college, and med school. I know this will take a lot of years of schooling but it will be worth it in the long run .I want to do this because ever since I could remember, I wanted to help people when they got hurt. I will achieve this goal by having good grades, not letting people get in my way and paying attention in school. I will remain motivated to become a heart surgeon by always wanting to care for people and not faint at the sight of blood.

Academic Language Week 33 - American Students

Cell phones should be allowed in schools and during class. One good reason about phones is that they could be useful by looking up things faster then a computer, but in CONTRAST kids could be on face book or text messaging to their friends. Another reason is that the CRITIQUE about this situation is that students with good grades and who are mature deserve privileges such as having their phones in school. Lastly, I would want to PERSUADE someone who dressage with phones not being allowed in school. In conclusion, students should be allowed to use their cell phones during school.

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Academic Language Week 33 - American Students

American students are falling behind academically compared to the students in other countries. One reason is that there has been DATA on student drop outs being more recent then it was in the past couple of years. Another reason is that COMPARED to the other countries, we are less advanced in technology then the countries who are have more advanced technology then the countries who don't. Lastly, the RANGE of teachers who are not as educated as the teachers in different countries who give out more education. That is why American students in America are failing then the other countries which are more advanced.