Performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, should not be allowed in sports. For example, people have to do things PRIMARILY, so that way they won’t damage their bodies. This shows that people would cheat TRADITION of sports. This also shows that people will possibly die more from using steroids. In addition, there will be a PERIOD in time when they will make a law about people taking drugs when they are in a sport. This shows that athletes should just stop now instead of making it harder on themselves. This also shows that athletes would be healthier instead of corrupting their career and trying to make themselves look good. In conclusion, doing drugs shouldn't be allowed in sports.
Woah! This hurts my eyes so much that I had to copy and paste it into Microsoft Word to grade it. Please review your text settings for me. Also, please work on finding more specific facts to add to your concrete details.
ReplyDeletePS. Tradition means a belief, custom, or way of doing something that has existed for a long time.