Showing posts with label narratives. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narratives. Show all posts

Monday, October 24, 2011

Narrative editing form

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Innocent to compassionate adult interview

When I was 17, I was innocent because I wanted to go to a football game but I wasn't allowed to go, so I pretended to go to sleep and snuck out when my parents went to bed. Then, I experienced the football game that I enjoyed but I felt guilty and was worrying that I was going to get caught, so I didn't stay long because I went to a party with some friends. This helped me to become compassionate because I got caught and I was grounded. After being grounded I learned how selfish it was for me to not listen and sneak out and to make my parents worry.

By Ms. Andrea

Autobiographical Narrative - Innocent to Compassionate Brainstorm

When I was 13, I was innocent because I trusted this stranger that happened to be my neighbor. Then, I experienced that riding in his car with him alone scared me a lot, because he was going down a different street that I didn't know of and I thought I was going to die or get raped. This helped me to become compassionate because I learnt not to trust strangers and I didn't want somebody else to get hurt if they trusted somebody they didn't know.

When I was 10, I was innocent because I saved up more then $300 and I went and spent it all on toys that I didn't want or like. Then I experienced that I should of saved  that money and spend it on little things that I want first or give it to somebody in need. This helped me to become compassionate because I was sad after spending it all on things I didn't want and I decided that I should save it on more important things that I or others would need.

When I was 12, I was innocent because this girl told me her secrets and I went and told somebody else. Then, I experienced that I should keep peoples secrets and not be a backstabber and tell other people. This helped to become compassionate because I still feel really guilty on what I did to my best friend, and I never want to do it to somebody else.

Which of these experiences should I write about?