Sunday, September 18, 2011

The Beautiful Mermaid

                                                               Exposition

One day John was skateboarding to his favorite spot in the mid-afternoon. That particular spot is the cliff. As he was getting nearer to his favorite spot he was suppose to stop but he wasn't paying attention, and once he realizes that it was to late to stop his skateboard, he trips, rips his ligament in his right ankle and falls off the cliff.

                                                       Rising Action
John wakes up to hearing to a far-off to sleep, then all of a sudden he feels something grab his left ankle, 'something scaly and slimy' John thought. Then before he knew it, he was underwater and unconscious. John wakes up to a beautiful mermaid staring down at him. She had long blond hair, and a beautiful multi-colored tail. Soon he realizes that one, he's underwater, two, his right ankle was healed. "Thank you" John said, "You're welcome John" said the beautiful mermaid said, "How did you know my name?" John asked, "Us mermaids have mythical powers help us out in a lot of things, without our powers we would die" she said, "What is your name, if you don't mind me asking?" asked John, "It's Frankie" said the beautiful mermaid, "some, and let me introduce you to my family." said Frankie.

                                                              Conclusion
As Frankie and John get to the mermaid castle, they see her family eating John's ex-girlfriend, Alicia. Once they see John they go after him. They chase Frankie and John into the dark depths of the ocean where there's alot of scary dangerous sea animals. "I think we lost them" panted Frankie, but sadly she was wrong, they grab Frankie and pull her away while the rest of the mermaid family corner John. 'What do I do, what do I do? thought John panicky. Eventually, he feels this surge of strange power, then he turns into a mermaid with a pink tail, and fights the mermaid family. In the end John marries Frankie, then he remembers his ex-girlfriend at home ((flashback) John and Alicia broke up after he caught her cheating on him. (back to the present) John lived happily ever after with his beautiful wife, Frankie.

Dragons Den:Life Lesson

A life lesson I learned the hard way is to not to steal. I used to think that it was easier stealing for food and supplies when I was out in the streets. Then I got caught one day, and the cops almost came and took me, which I had to run for my life. I learned that stealing was not the right way to go especially if you get caught and it gets put on to your record. Now I don't steal and if I want something I save up my money for it so I could enjoy using it.

Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Dragons Den: Power Outage

On Thursday evening I was at the doctor to get shots, when suddenly the lights went out and the cooler went off. In response I wasn't to freaked out until they said they couldn't put me in the system to go get my shots. Then I went back home and made a new friend name Chris. Later I finished school and went home and finally realized that the power went out. When the power came back on I was really excited and went back to bed.

Wednesday, September 7, 2011

"Dog Star" Before You Read: Special Animal

Yes I did have a special relationship with an animal, her name is pattycake, she was a black cat with seven finger in her front paws and six fingers in the back paws. She wasn't the nicest cat but the cutest, she was like a second mom to me. I tried to teach her how to do tricks but it never worked, but it did usually backfire on me. The only trick she did do was chasing me into my bed and clawing at my feet when it was past my bed time. When ever I was gone from school for the whole day or when I'm gone for a week she would jump on me the moment she would see me. She was my favorite animal and still is even though I had to give her away, it was really hard for me because I was young and I didn't really understand all the way and all I knew was that I wasn't going to see her again.

Tuesday, September 6, 2011

"The Most Dangerous Game" Sequel Narrative Paragraph

The most dangerous game started off when Rainsford fell off the boat. As he swam to the island on where he heard the gunshots, he found a castle on the island. When he finally reached the castle he met Ivan the servant and General Zaroff. As General Zaroff told him about the most dangerous game. Soon after General Zaroff told him about the rules, he eventually agreed to play the game. After three days Rainsford won the hunt of the most dangerous game. After the first most dangerous game they do a new one and gladly Rainsford won again. That is what happened in the book of the most dangerous game.

Saturday, September 3, 2011

Dragons Den: Shoes

My favorite brand type of shoes are converse. In case you have never seen these types of shoes before they are thin, usually black and white, and they are in they have a mark on them called "All Star". I do wear these shoes on a regular basis because I usually buy one pair at a time until the ones I have at the moment are ripping apart and they are my favorite types of shoes. I like these shoes because when I was younger I had friends wear them and while I was poor I could never be able to buy a pair, and now that I'm older and that I save up my money I can finally buy pairs of converse and completing my gothic look almost all the time. That is why my favorite shoe brand is converse.

Thursday, September 1, 2011

“The Most Dangerous Game” Plot Change

Mr. Rainsford's decision was to try and catch his pipe that fell out of his mouth into the ocean. If he didn't try and catch his pipe he wouldn't have fallen into the ocean, but because he tried to catch his pipe he lost his balance and he fell into the water. If I was Mr. Rainsford I would have thought better of it and try not to catch my pipe and I wouldn't have fallen into the ocean. That's is what would of happen and Mr. Rainsford would've been on the yacht and be stuck in the Strip-Trap island